Here is a working link to my final cut.
My greatest success is that I didn't miss the deadline. I was certain I needed to finish it on time, and I pulled through.
However, my greatest weakness is that it was on time, because that meant the final product was slightly rushed.
However, my message is clear - do NOT publicly support the FBI backdoor, or you are promoting the destruction of the first amendment.
Hi Chandler! I like your 'greatest success', I'm definitely in the same boat as you! Haha. But wow, I really really enjoyed your project! I chose to peer review it for Copy Editing.
ReplyDeleteThere isn't much for me to say, but I just had one comment with the sources; I felt like you were a little bit vague on why you chose some of your sources/ what they meant to your project and how they proved to be credible. Sometimes it is more obvious than others, especially to you, as the creator of the project. But that isn't always as easily conveyed to us as the audience. My only other thing to say about sources is that it would be nice to see a final compilation of which sources you used so I could check out the website/article/whatever for myself.
Really well done on your project, though, I was strugglin to find things to comment on!
Katie